Newsletter Issue #9: Reading & VERY Messy Writing


Dumelang (Hello) &

Q1 has ended... I was about to add, and so abruptly (lol).

My plan was to be finished with draft zero of the manuscript to my second novel. "Draft zero" because I came across this term and rather liked the no-pressure invitation — to write even if it's messy... and when you are ready, you can share a more coherent version with your writing group. Mind you, sharing the messy first draft of my debut novel with my writing group was the momentum I needed to finish it.

The only thing with this second book is that I don't feel I know what I'm trying to say yet. Or, I have too many things I'm trying to say, and not one thing is clear enough. So I really need the space to think, through writing a VERY messy draft without the interference of external voices.

At some point, I'll share the first picture I saw in my mind when I first dreamed up the second book, which I've titled Bokamoso (Sotho for "Future").

If there's anything else you'd like to see in the newsletter, please do let me know. I am actively considering what else to do [here] to keep things interesting for myself (and for you, hopefully).

As for my debut... all I have to say about it is: we are seven months on submission. We've received our 3rd pass (out of eight), which, funny enough, was an answered prayer — the difference between not knowing (so you can't have closure), and knowing, processing, and moving on. And remembering that a "no" is as powerful an answer as a yes.

WHAT ELSE?

I've been reading — not just listening to audiobooks, and the occasional (if riveting) ebook — but I've wanted to hold a physical book in my hands recently. I recently finished Mine Boy by Peter Abrahams (see more under Book Recs). I'm currently reading Es'kia Mphahlele's memoir Down Second Avenue (you'll hear more about him because not only is he South African, but he's from my home province of Limpopo). And this weekend I'm getting into Good Dirt by Charmaine Wilkerson.

AND?

I am reading eleven entries for a Word mentorship program (much like LitUp), and I'm having a ton of fun seeing what other writers — in this case, Young Adult authors — are creating. I am genuinely challenged and encouraged by the sheer amount of work others like me are putting into their craft. And I'm moved by the passion with which other writers are pursuing their art to build a more diverse literary environment that reflects cultures and experiences beyond Western norms.


BACKSTORY

One of the characters in my debut (DRY BONES), Johnny, is a miner, forced to leave his rural village for Johannesburg. Growing up, and still today, some South Africans call Johannesburg Gauteng/eGoli (the place of gold, in Sotho and isiZulu, respectively) — though Gauteng is actually the province, encompassing far more than just the City of Johannesburg.

Way back when, the Boers — Dutch-descended settlers also known today as Afrikaners — were carving themselves a place in South Africa, away from the British who had taken over the Cape Colony, prompting thousands of Boers to undertake the Great Trek, pushing into the interior and seizing land from its native inhabitants, to establish independent republics in the Transvaal and Orange Free State.

At that time, Johannesburg was nothing more than a rural landscape in the then-Transvaal Republic — until gold was discovered in 1886, triggering one of history's great gold rushes. After that discovery, Johannesburg would rapidly become Africa's most vibrant economic center. But at the heart of this economic explosion was one of the most heinous exploitations of the black majority — and more specifically, of black men lured (or more accurately, coerced) through the crushing weight of unfair taxation away from their homelands and into the gold mines. This marked the beginning of the still-unrepaired breakdown of black families that continues to reverberate today.

I wanted to explore this landscape of life in the mines for black men that I came across Peter Abrahams' book, The Mine Boy....

Ntebogeng

READING CORNER

Source: https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/mine-boy-peter-abrahams/1100839729

One of the first ever African novels in English by a radical black South African writer: the 1946 classic of one boy’s loves, friendships and political awakening as a mine worker in Johannesburg's slums.

"The first African novel in English to draw international attention." — New York Times

"The forerunner of an entire school of African literary art." — Sunday Times

And the black man and the white were like two men alone in the world ….

Xuma will never forget the day he arrived in the Johannesburg slums: the charismatic woman who takes him in, the brutal police raids, the fights, friendships, dancing, drinking and romances - yet it soon feels like home. But when he becomes a leader in the city's gold mines, he is shocked by the racist treatment of the labourers. And as he begins to question whether ‘man could be without colour’, Xuma stages an act of defiance that changes his life forever . . .

In 1946, Peter Abrahams’ classic novel Mine Boy exposed South Africa’s fledgling racial apartheid system and townships to the world – and its wisdom, vividness and political power endures to this day.

Peter Abrahams was born on March 3, 1919, in Vrededorp, near Johannesburg, South Africa — a groundbreaking novelist whose work was among the first to bring the harsh realities of apartheid to an international audience. After living in Britain, he eventually made Jamaica his home, where he died on January 18, 2017, at the age of 97.

You might wonder why all the South African books I recommend have something or other to do with apartheid. The simplest answer is that I can't imagine there being a South African story — written in the past or in the present — that would not carry some explicit or implicit reference to apartheid and colonial oppression. Because it was the air that everyone breathed, rancid and suffocating. And even long after the windows of freedom have been thrown open and fresh air has come rushing in, the horrible smell has permeated the whole house. Even the walls smell of it. Perhaps some things can only be fixed by tearing them down — but even then, there'd still be the rubble to speak of.

This book — the style of it — was different. More literary than commercial, you could say. It was a slow read, but there was something enthralling about it — something raw, even in its simplicity. You don't have all the answers when the book ends, but you have hope. And for me, those are the best kinds of books.


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